A bit more finished, the colour tone is such that it is reflecting a bloody bathroom scene.
The blood stain, glue spots and lens flare also give it more depth.
I have played around by making it look more like a Gillette blade with text positioning, font, arrows, numbers etc
but it became too fussy for something so small so I removed most of it.The space left in this case is as important as the text.
Maybe a Gillette arrow pointing to "theshaving" is a possibility maybe it could take that.
I abandoned the "text as slot" idea entirely as it became rather lost when scaled down to the right size for logo.
I think the concept is close to being resolved but its a little bit more edgy than members may prefer.
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