Less haste required of Tom, me thinks.
I'm comfortable with the plethora of "he" variants, although I understand that they may not make for gentle reading. I shall endeavour to be kind and use paragraphs next time. I suppose I should forewarn that there shall inevitably be a time when I'm unwell and write some long steam of consciousness that will be a veritable punctuation desert. When that occurs, I beg kind forgiveness (I am comfortable explaining that in a pm, @Brechet)
However, I rather need to proof read when using this keyboard type (SwiftKey) on my phone...
For "Dio sing which" was intended as "Dio song which"
Likewise "only moderately winded though " would have been far more effective as my desired text, "only moderately wronged, though ".
Hopefully with the above substitutions, my post becomes closer to being digestible.
Thanks for the flag.